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         I'm a <span id="age"></span> year old with a love for computer science and a passion for creating. I enjoy setting myself challenges and thrive when it comes to short deadlines. <br>
         I love learning and want to push myself to do more and leave my comfort zones.<br>
-        </br>I hope to find a career in software engineering, and aim for an apprenticeship at the end of year 13 (starting 2025).<br>
-        I think my greatest achievements are my GCSE grades and my personal growth over the past couple of years.
+        </br>I hope to find a career in software engineering, cyber security, or any interesting field at all, and am aiming to get an apprenticeship at the end of year 13 (which would be starting 2025).<br>
+        I think my greatest achievement is my personal growth over the past few of years. I've greatly improved my ability to talk in front of people and under stress. I have also improved my technical knowledge of things outside the scope of my A-levels. This includes things like fixing laptops, and various devices, for fun. This was of course greatly aided by my friends who all have knowlede of different fields which I have been picking up over time. 
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